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Petra's avatar

Stumbled here through Ray's Substack, and I'm so glad I did. This piece is brilliant! You have a new sub! <3

Dawn Klinge's avatar

Thank you! I'm glad it resonated with you.

Petra's avatar

My pleasure <3

Kim Eckhart's avatar

“It fizzed bright against the tongue” wow! What an evocative poem!

Elizabeth's avatar

This is so unique and exquisite. I could see it and taste it. Still lingering.